I was
whole
I was
focused
I was
perfectly
ME
When did
I become
blind
I become
pieces
I become
less
ME
I
have lost
sight of
MYSELF
will
I
ever find
ME
again?
lg/18032021
*Note: my song choice https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=DVTAdaXl3QU
🌎✌🏻💙 Take care, be safe.
https://reinventionsreena.wordpress.com/2021/03/18/reenas-xploration-challenge-177/
perfectly fragmented in form and content; a mood of dissociation: I have them from time to time; keep well 🙂
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Thank you, John. Your comments always welcomed. 😊
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Beautifully expressed thought 💚
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Awww thank you, twisty.
😊💙
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Most welcome, bluey 😉💚
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Nice song! Thanks for sharing. And a point of view brought across crisply in a few words.
Thanks for joining in!
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Glad you liked the song, it was my pleasure to join in. Thank you for reading and commenting. 🙂🙏🏼
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Poetic thoughts ……by eob2
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I know, you’re writing on a prompt, Blue….but the emotions expressed through….are quite relatable & beautiful….
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Thank you, Navin. Appreciated. 🙏🏼💙💫🙂
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You’re welcome, Blue 💙✨
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😊💫💙
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Thank you for sharing my post. 🙏🏼😊
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You certainly rose to the challenge of the prompt!
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A wonderfully crafted piece!!
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. 🙏🏼🙂
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You are most welcome! It was an enjoyable read! 🙂
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The image and the video fit your words and fragmented style. Well done!
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Happy you enjoyed the experience of both. Thank you. 🙂
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you always for the share. 🙂💙🌻 have a great weekend.
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You know I always love to share your words/posts, Dear! Hope you are doing well?? Have a great weekend!
xoxox 💖🎁😘🌹🌹
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I am in doing well, thank you. Wishing you the same! 😊💙🌻🙏🏼💫
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Amazing piece!
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Thank you, Eugenia, your comments always appreciated. 😊🤗💙🌷
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Thank you Mr. H. 😊
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So deep and evocative
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Thank you for reading and commenting. 🙏🏼🙂
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My pleasure.
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Fragmented is a broken word. I like your choice of ‘fadeaway’. It is a slower, more tragic and lost process and how beautifully your word alignment reflects that . . .
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Thank you, Jaya. 😊🤗🙏🏼
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This is very good , Eob. Simple and elegant, warrior warmth strength in them words.
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Thank you, Yassy, appreciated. 🙂🙏🏼
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I am digging the paired song choices 😁
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Thank you, I try and find music for the poems that has a relation or duality. Glad you’re digging it. 😊
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This is beautifully written. KL ❤
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Thank you. 🙏🏼🙂
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