internal turmoil~
percolates in that dark place~
minds cognitive ruse~
apprehensively aware~
afraid it will boil over~
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*Note: We’ve all experienced That Day, you know when it all becomes too much. Sometimes it’s hard to suppress our emotions, how you deal with them is what counts. Mine is meditation and music. Close your eyes and listen.
🌎✌🏻💙 Take care, be safe.
Written for: https://wordofthedaychallenge.wordpress.com/2021/02/08/internal/
That’s a good, strong piece and the image is perfect accompaniment!
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Thank you for reading and commenting, appreciated. 🙏🏼🙂
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Top Tanka!
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Thanks Mr. H 🙂
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you are very welcome🙂
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Great post
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Thank you for the time to read and commenting. 🙏🏼💙🙂
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My pleasure 😍
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terrific tortured tanka: the maelstrom mind percolating to the boil; love the soothing music; contemplative
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Thank you, John. Maelstrom I love that! 😊
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In five lines, you encompass some of my days and all of them at once. I love how on point this tanka is and how beautifully it renders ‘that day’ in words!
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Thank you, Jaya. Always appreciate your thoughtful comments. 😊
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Hope your got better bluey 💚
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😁 thanks, the writing made it great! 😉💙
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Getting it out and giving it a name often does. look after yourself 😉💚
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A tanka for life this one 🖤🖤🖤
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Now why did I know this would be a goal for you? 😉🖤💙🖤
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How wow….deep lines….they carry the whole ocean….the image is perfect to your tanka, Blue 💙 ✨
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Thank you, Navin. Some days the ocean is overwhelming. 🙂💙🙏🏼💫
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True….Blue 💙 ✨ 🙏
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Powerful piece! 👍
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Thank you, Eugenia. 🙂
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You’re most welcome! 😉
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Exceptional piece.
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Thank you for reading, comment appreciated. 🙏🏼
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My pleasure 🌸
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